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 Comments I will also confess I did this on no sleep lol but I love everything you've said and line work is a big issue for me! Thank you for this ^-^!
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 hey its not bad for a sleepy head. Definitely keep working on your line work, thats the basics! I also love how you do faces though, I'd love an art trade, even if it was just a face shot. We have one in the works :3 , you were one of the oens I stated in my profile that I promised too :3!! I really need to work on eyes too, going to actually go back and do some body sketches again and line art is something I'll forever fail at ( or at it feels that way, I just have a messy style xD but that's what works for me) , >.> its usually lacking in most of my work >.>
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 lol forgot wasn't sure if we actually agreed to it. Oh yea definitely dont give up, just go back to pen and paper, dont even use pencil. Just go straight to pen, no tablet and get those hard lines out. Even if the body is crappy just keep working on it. Your eyes are okay too. What I was actually gonna say is that when you do blacks in coloring like a black dress or black arm or boot, keep it sharp. Its a weird concept but aside from hot and cold colors light and dark shades there is also a thing called soft and hard. Black is a hard color and is sharp so it shouldn't look blurred whereas white and other light colors can be blurred and still look fine. Keep this in mind Oh I'm saying though, get better with pen and paper and your tablet skills would improve I'm sure but either way line art first
 even if ur strictly a painter. I've seen that one I think I'll check it out. did I upload it reviously? ahhh sleepy me is forgetful lolol but oh no usuallu pen and paper I'm a sketcher, that's just my style then again if I ever had my choice of mediums , paper would beacrylic or watercolours, inks , charcole, conte, messy mediums >.> which is probably why I do things the way that I do >>>
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You already have a unique style and even in the colored version I would keep the line work sharp like how you do at the top of the head, and on a personal note, I like the old coloring style better, Nothing wrong with the light and dark and lighting effects of this but it does seem a little pixelated close up.